Tuesday 21 April 2020

six sentence story

this is my 6 sentence story 
The Steps to a Six sentence story

1. The First Sentence starts with "Once a pon a time" Then you introduce your main character
2. The Second Sentence is describing where the character lived
3. describes their special talent
4.Describes the characters problem
5. Why they felt that why
6. how they solved the problem
this story is based on me and how i survived living in lockdown without seeing my friends and family.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kyah

    Thanks for sharing your story with us all. What an easy way to write a story! This has been a challenging time for us all being at home for so long. I am sure that even if you are a little bored that you have had some fun along the way too.
    What sort of things have you been up to?
    Do you like the online school work? or would you rather be at school?
    I have done lots of jobs around my house but I am looking forward to getting back to school.

    Keep up the great work!

    Talk again soon!

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Kia ora Zyah,

    Kei te pehea koe?

    How are you and your whanau doing? Are you enjoying Learning from Home?
    I know it is hard to be away from your friends for so long. I miss my friends too. I am thankful that we have video chat so I can still talk to my friends and see their faces. Have you been catching up with your family and friends online?

    Looking forward to seeing you soon,
    Ka kite au i a koe.

    Mrs Gully

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  3. Kia ora Zyah, You have descibed how many of us feel about lockdown however it is so great we can use technology to connect with others. I like the clear format of your writing and the clear font. This was a thoughtful and well presnted piece of writing. I think this girl is also very good with manaakitanga.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.