Wow nyah that is Amazing OH hello my name is Ashlee and I am a yar six at Yaldhurst Model School. next time make it more interesting. I like the way that you added the read and black makes it stand out a lot. bye for now. Sincerely Ashlee
Zyah this is EPIC! I really like how you have made them all into there own little speech bubbles, and that you have the questions at the top, come to think of it, it is kind of like an all about me sheet! I like the design!
This brings me back to when I made something similar to this, I was So proud of myself and how it looked lol!
I just think that you could add a bit more to this and you will be set to go one with more blog posts!
Hi Zyah this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school why did you have to do this. How many days did this take. What did you have to do this on. Kind regards Michaela
Hey Zyah, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst model school. (All people who commented on your blog are in my class:). I like how it motivates you to think about the good things about yourself and not about the bad things. I think it is kind to help people. Next time you could write why you are writing this, also you could write a bit more. (: Kind Regards Lucy :) Please comment on my blog. (Lucy @ Yaldhurst Primary)
Kia ora Zyah! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Zyah! I love the work you've done! I like how you made the text boxes red so their easy to read! Because I've come across a few people who have made their work harder to read by their background being dark, with their writing also being dark, or having the font too hard to read, or having the background too complicated.
I realized that we have similar positives and strengths! Like I also like how I'm good at singing, I'm thankful for having shelter and food, I make other people happy by smiling and telling jokes, and someone that makes me laugh is my best friend! :3
Next time, you could try to make your title more interesting, so that it would lure people into looking and commenting on your blog!
Kia ora Zyah, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked the way you put all the thinks you are positive or happy about and how you've helped others, all sorts of stuff like that. I also quite like the font.
This reminds me of another blog about the same thing and had the same title, it was a different blog though, but it was pretty similar.
To improve, you could add more different colours because the red is just a bit weird on its own.
Kia Ora Zyah, I am Olivia From Yaldhurst School, Great work with your blog it is really cool.It kind of is a little bit like the other blog post I commented on before!.Great Job form doing all of that self that oyu basically like about yourself. Bye.
Wow nyah that is Amazing OH hello my name is Ashlee and I am a yar six at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeletenext time make it more interesting.
I like the way that you added the read and black makes it stand out a lot.
bye for now.
Sincerely Ashlee
Zyah this is EPIC! I really like how you have made them all into there own little speech bubbles, and that you have the questions at the top, come to think of it, it is kind of like an all about me sheet! I like the design!
ReplyDeleteThis brings me back to when I made something similar to this, I was So proud of myself and how it looked lol!
I just think that you could add a bit more to this and you will be set to go one with more blog posts!
anyways, BYEEE!
Hi Zyah this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeletewhy did you have to do this.
How many days did this take.
What did you have to do this on.
Kind regards
Michaela
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you said something kind you have done is help tinea in you class.
Did you think about anything else you could add.
Next time you could write a little bit more.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Hey Zyah, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst model school. (All people who commented on your blog are in my class:). I like how it motivates you to think about the good things about yourself and not about the bad things. I think it is kind to help people. Next time you could write why you are writing this, also you could write a bit more.
ReplyDelete(: Kind Regards Lucy :)
Please comment on my blog.
(Lucy @ Yaldhurst Primary)
Kia ora Zyah! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Zyah! I love the work you've done! I like how you made the text boxes red so their easy to read! Because I've come across a few people who have made their work harder to read by their background being dark, with their writing also being dark, or having the font too hard to read, or having the background too complicated.
I realized that we have similar positives and strengths! Like I also like how I'm good at singing, I'm thankful for having shelter and food, I make other people happy by smiling and telling jokes, and someone that makes me laugh is my best friend! :3
Next time, you could try to make your title more interesting, so that it would lure people into looking and commenting on your blog!
Keep up the amazing work!
From Hana (^-^)
Kia ora Zyah, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put all the thinks you are positive or happy about and how you've helped others, all sorts of stuff like that. I also quite like the font.
This reminds me of another blog about the same thing and had the same title, it was a different blog though, but it was pretty similar.
To improve, you could add more different colours because the red is just a bit weird on its own.
Why did you blog about this?
Bye Zyah, keep it up!
-Amelia 🦊
Kia Ora Zyah, I am Olivia From Yaldhurst School, Great work with your blog it is really cool.It kind of is a little bit like the other blog post I commented on before!.Great Job form doing all of that self that oyu basically like about yourself.
ReplyDeleteBye.