Friday 31 May 2019

YELLOW ZONE :)

This week In te hiringa we have been learning about zone regulations. so whaea katie gave a task. the first task was we had to get into a small group and talk about what makes us angry. then we had to  go on a google drawing and tell people what you feel when you feel Angry. the second task is.we have to get into the same group and tell them what makes us feel sad. the third task is we have to make another poster but this one is called the yellow zone this means u might feel happy confused silly here is my poster.

9 comments:

  1. Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked the way you have lots of writing for me to read, it makes my job easier because I have to comment on what you wrote and look at the pictures too. The interesting part was when you put out silly and excited. It makes me wonder if the yellow zone is in between the green zone and the blue zone.😕

    When I read your post I learnt about a few things, like what kind of things you do in your class. I think I have a better understanding of all the zones now, especially the yellow zone, thanks for teaching me!😀

    To improve, you could add more detail into the writing, I have a basic idea but I think I need more. Another thing would be for you to add capital letters at the start of each sentence, I know it sounds boring but it is a pretty basic thing to have.

    Question time!

    Why did you add a picture of Joy, the movie character, when she fits into the green zone?

    What is your favorite zone?

    Well I had a great time reading your blog post, so I hope you had a great time making it. I look forward to seeing your future blog posts, so please make them more often. 😉

    -Amelia

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    1. Hello Amelia it's zyah here thank you for you comment umm I put a picture of joy because some times when you are in the yellow zone you might feel happy. and my favourite zone is green. I hope to hear from you again. talk to you soon
      - your sincerely zyah

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  2. Hello Zyah. My name is Renae, I am from Yaldhurst model school. I really like how you added a poster to tell us a little more about the yellow zone. Did you think about telling us about what puts you in the yellow zone. This reminded me of when my friends and I do silly things. Have you ever been in yellow zone?-Renae

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  3. Hi There Zyah My name is Jonathon from yaldhurst model school.

    I love How you have created a cool poster.
    This reminided me of when some other children did something similar about the red zone and blue zone.
    How come you decided to do a blog about this?

    yours sincerely : Jonathon.

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  4. hey zyah my name is Sebastian yaldhurst model school. I love your yellow zones work it is very cool. did you think about more work zyah? why did make this zyah?

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  5. Kia Ora I am Mykiala from Yaldhurst Model School.
    I like the way you have told us the proges you had to go throw to then get up to blogging.
    I enjoyed the part when the you had the emojoys.
    Next time you could write the achele word YOU not U.

    Mykiala YMS

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  6. Kia Ora I am Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School.
    I like the way you have told us the proges you had to go throw to then get up to blogging.
    I enjoyed the part when the you had the emojoys.
    Next time you could write the achele word YOU not U.

    Delilah Yms

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  7. Hi Zyahk I'm alvin from yms I liked the way you said all the yellow zone things and all the pictures.did you think about adding some more pages to make it more intresting. did you do this becasue you somtimes feel like that?. what is you most do you do the most in the yellow zone?

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  8. kia ora i'm olivia from yaldhurst model school
    I liked the way you added joy not like Amelia my friend how questioned it which was super weird right? well i really don't understand how you wrote confused on that and now i am confused and why did you think it is confused?

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