Friday 10 August 2018

My Treasure

This past week Mrs prendergast Brought in a Box And it had her special thing in and Mamaku 2 Had to try and guess what was in the box and we thought it was a teddy nd a book and Mrs prendergast said that it was a book and  a teddy. Then  she told us Why it was precious. Then she told us that we had to think of something that is special or precious to us.here is mine.Walt using conjunctions to join our Ideas together.
I liked this I think we should do some more writing
Like This.
Maybe next time I should make it more cloulerful and Make it more intresting



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  1. Unknown15 August 2018 at 12:25

    Kia ora Zyah. Your pounamu is definitely something that needs to be treasured because it holds so many precious memories for you. You started describing what it looks like but I wondered if you could add more detail to this - detailing the shape of the taniwha and describing what a taniwha is?
    Thank you for sharing Zyah
    Kind regards
    Mrs England

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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